Discussing topical issues for women in cross-cultural and inter-continental relationships

NYC Midnight Madness Short Story Challenge

Here is my story for this years NYC Short Story Challenge. I am putting it here in the hope I can post it to the forum for feedback.  It was a discontinuous narrative and then I changed it to a linear storyline. I prefer discontinuous and now wonder whether the story flows well; there are many ‘big’ events. Let me know what you think.

The Golden Child

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